Saturday, March 17, 2007

Apologies and Verse One.

Sorry for the lack of poetry today. I hope you all weren't too discouraged. I hope, to make up for the missing poem, you will all enjoy the first verse to the song I am currently writing. The chorus, if you remember, is titled At Midnight - the previous post.

(So Far Untitled)

Kaylee A. Ferree

Laughing. All the flowers tickle
Elbows, knees and I can't think at all,
Save for all the ways I love you
To me, you are beautiful.
But that's over now.
The Spring-time of our Love is gone.



Don't worry. I am not writing this song about my current relationship with Shane. Far from it. I'm just piecing together bad memories of past relationships to make a, hopefully, decent song. Please let me know what you think.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

i think shane rocks.

Shannon Smith said...

I love it, Kaylee! It has my vote!

Anonymous said...

Yeah... I agree with anonymous reader number 1... Shane does rock...

Anonymous said...

This Shane character sounds like a pretty sweet guy... hmmm... almost like a guy that would buy you flowers and butterscotch... hmmm... yeah... much like that sort of guy.